really really enjoyed this piece and (like any good goldsmith grad) loved the dialogue with Hall. i was unaware there was a debate, but you so perfectly articulated the history of the conversation and your own considerations. the discourse on punctuation and syntax reminded me of this incredible piece about the aside and the parenthetical that is still at the top of my mind when i write a year and a half later: https://www.thebeliever.net/aside-affects-lauren-michele-jackson/
brilliantly and eloquently told - this opened my eyes to this internal debate within me that i didn’t know how to put into words. thank you for this
really really enjoyed this piece and (like any good goldsmith grad) loved the dialogue with Hall. i was unaware there was a debate, but you so perfectly articulated the history of the conversation and your own considerations. the discourse on punctuation and syntax reminded me of this incredible piece about the aside and the parenthetical that is still at the top of my mind when i write a year and a half later: https://www.thebeliever.net/aside-affects-lauren-michele-jackson/
It is a long journey and continues to be in process for a lot of us! I recall the flag hoisting days at school ..